I like the separate stanzas and the refrain.

Good work.

Take care,

Michael

Ekta, I like the repetition of "come on, come on" It's like a dare to all who read this...

1: Yes we should all forget about the past because what's done is done but it also makes us who we are today.

2: I feel life is what we make it.

3: We are all unique which is what makes us extra special but it would be even more special if we all got on.

4: We can all take heed from this and stop wasting time. Time truly is precious and waits for no one.

5: Very wise words none of us know when we will be gone from here so should live life to the fullest.

6: None of us should have regrets other than things we have wanted to so but didn't get around to them.

7: Most definitely we should try things out of our comfort zone because we never know we might like them

8: Smiles are very contagious and go a long way.

Fantastic advice. Em