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*Gem* ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-14

"it feels like i'm missing a piece
an empty void i cannot fill"

I can relate to this couplet and i'm sure a lot of people on this site can too.
I love the structure of this poem

Poetvoices ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-14

I love the fact that you did use a "normal" word pattern! I LOVED THE FORM! :)

CHOKE ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-18

Lovely poem mate. 5/5 deffinately. i wouldn't change a thing :)

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