*Gem* ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-14
"it feels like i'm missing a piece
an empty void i cannot fill"
I can relate to this couplet and i'm sure a lot of people on this site can too.
I love the structure of this poem
5/5
*Gem*
Poetvoices ( F P C D )
at 2007-01-14
I love the fact that you did use a "normal" word pattern! I LOVED THE FORM! :)
PV
CHOKE ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-18
Lovely poem mate. 5/5 deffinately. i wouldn't change a thing :)
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