Awww, that's a really neat poem. Lol, some girls are really rotten and intimidating. Especially the way they talk about guys. The ones you wrote about, sound like the ones that talk about their own friends behind their back. Like in Mean Girls. You are fascinating Melissa. From your poetry you seem like a really sweet person and I definitely think you were interesting. Also a very good poet :)

You are the master. You can take any scene and make it seem larger than life. You can the ordinary abstract. Brilliant poem. I love it!

Great poem. The loose structure somehow added to the obscurity of what the poem was about. Loved it!