Comments : Tiny little Drops

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "Where tiny toads just jump from here to there just splashing in and splashing out my thoughts"

    ^^^^^^

    What a wonderful line this is, in a thoroughly mesmerising poem. I love the alliteration of "tiny toads"! Nominated.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Such beautiful write

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    I get a happy feeling while reading this piece....the tiny toads just paint a picture for the minds eye that brings a smile to my face.
    Great job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Love this!