Comments : Daddy's Little Whore

  • 11 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    That was really good. that would be such a tramatic experience. I wouldn't wish it on any one. I hope everythings ok now, or at least getting better.

  • 11 years ago

    by ashlyn

    Wow...that was great. i think thats the best poem ive read about that topic in a long as$ time, very good dont change a thing!

  • 11 years ago

    by Gale

    Very good. Very deep and tramatic. I liked it. I could never even imagine going through something like that.

  • 11 years ago

    by Cayce

    Wow. That was some intense stuff. I've never gone through this, but I could feel the emotion as if it was really happening to me.. I love how at the end she gets brave and fights and how she says "I'm sorry Daddy, But I am NOT your little who.re."

    There was a little spelling error.
    "Every flench, every tear."
    ^^Flench should be flinch. :]

    Very good poem!

    Cayce xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Shinobi

    At first I was afraid that this is based on a true story, glad that it's not. Short lines, amazing flow and nice rhymes. This poem is surely well written, nice job 5/5

  • Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. It had so much tension in this. You kind of described me, but in my case, it wasn't my dad, it was my cousin. Anyway, the imagery and the flow were just right. The choice of words were great. 5/5<---wish I could give it more because it deserves it.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    That was outstanding work....Even though its not personal to you(thankgod) The sad thing is it is for so many others...WELL DONE.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Very dramatic
    and the way you write is very dynamic, it's cool
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Blissful

    I'm glad to know this is not from personal experiance but you wrote it with such power that it was real convincing. I liked tht title because it summed up the poem as a whole perfectly. There were some parts where the flow was rocky but the emotions were so strong that it made up for it. Well done *5/5*

  • 11 years ago

    by Wallace

    A nice poem, but I thought it could be alittle more interesting. Because I've read alot of these and this one seems like the ordinary. But nice try.

  • 11 years ago

    by Em

    I can say this was a "very nice" nor can I say "it was beutiful" poem but it was very well writtened and it amaze me that you can write it so good even if you haven't experienced it. It kicked ass, in other words =) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Wow, this is a really good poem. You are very talented! It's so scary to think this really happens... and you made it seem so real in your writing... good work! 5/5! Sorry i didn't r/r/c sooner! i've been super busy but... i'm going to make sure and get it done today! take care! you write beautifully!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lemma

    I'm so glad that this is not from personal experience but what a gripping read! Great pace and rythmn and a positive and powerful ending. 5/5

    Em xXx

  • 11 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Lace, that was a VERY strong piece. I applaud your mind. Sad the story is, strong is the heart that carries it. Definately a fav.

  • 11 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    Im glad that didnt happen to you. you did a geat job making it seem really, the emotion in this poem is amazing

  • 11 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Im glad this is not a personal experience, things like this happen in our world and they are guite tradgic.
    The words flowed well, and you certainly held my attention. I really like the outcome and how you ended the piece.

    A strong emotional write, that is unfortunatly relatable to some people.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by she

    Wow,ive written a poem called "rape", that was like this, but this, this is better, this is great, but very sad.

  • 11 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Okay, wow. This made me cringe. The whole time I read it. Ah I'm shuddering just thinking about it. This entire poem was strong, and creepy. But in a good way, of coarse. [: The rhyme scheme was good, very constant. The flow was pretty close to perfect, and overall, the poem was a fantastic read! [: 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Brandy

    WOW an amazing poem...when first reading I thought it was real..but in the end it wasn't...I hate to think that someone out there is going through this and its sad...but its such an amazing poem thought wouldn't change a thing...5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Wow.. That was a really good peom. And I'm very glad this is not a personal experience. Very emotional, you almost had me in tears becuase of the strong emotion. This is one of the reasons i'm going to become a Social worker to stop monsters like that. Anyway very good job on this it flows perfect. 5/5