Comments : Betrayal

  • 6 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Meaningful poem........what is any relationship without trust ?

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    The depths of sadness are felt within this entire piece Larry-

    the flow is elegant and it left me lingering after i was finished reading....powerful emotions can be brought out within the reader, and this piece left me with tears... well done~

  • 6 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Very emotional. trust is key in a relationship. 5/5