Comments : I dont want to wake up; I dont want to fall asleep

  • 9 years ago

    by Aure

    I completely love it, it's something you don't see here every day (and since there's a lot posted, that is quite some :p)
    your rhyming scheme is wonderfull, it doesn't seem like the words are only chosen for rhyme (as some seem to do it). The contence is probably just as important (or even more) than the style you used.
    Thumbs ub

  • 9 years ago

    by Freedom

    I cant lose you over again; I just cant take the pain,
    To tell you the truth; every nights the same

    i totaly fell in love with these lines :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Matt L

    Thank you both very much. I really appreciate the commets!