Your poem was extremely well written, Catherine. no one in this world wishes to be forgotten in the end, and i think you expressed your thoughts very well. keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more of it.

Denise a.k.a BlueAngel

" I brightened peoples days with simply a hey " is that statement true? Really nice, good work. Keep it up.

Great job.... i like the last part the most!

I think the thought behind this poem is very good. A good write.