My love.....

by Jade Shadow Rose   Feb 21, 2008


So too, are you, stuck in this mess,
So true, you are, in loves guess,
So fly, away, to the clouds,
So sly, you slide, from the crowds.

Hold thee, forever, never let go,
Hold me, together, I fall too low,
Hold on, to love, try not to hate,
Hold fast, and still, it's not too late.

I long, for you, among the rest,
My song, for you, I'll sing the best,
I wish, and long, and love and hold,
My list, grows longer, my heart unfolds,

Your eyes, see not, your own reflection,
Your smile, shines through, your worst inspection,
Your body, celestial, shames the sun,
Your aura, cannot, be undone.

Like, a rose, so beautiful,
Like, a sunset, so magical,
Like, a ghost, so seldom seen,
Like, a mystery, so keen.

And so, I end, on this final note,
And so, I tell, with no sugarcoat,
And somewhere, maybe, you'll hear me out,
And always, you, I cannot be without.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ShadowedEyesLie

    That has potential for a really good song. Fine job. Shows a lot of emotion and some great description. Keep up the good work and in the future you could be in school text books.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lorryn

    This was so beautifully written, you have a great talent, especially with description, im adding it to my favourites...