Comments : Dignity and Grace

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    This really gave me chills. What a piece you have penned here. Dark and chilling. Imagery is awesome.
    Take care
    Love your friend Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    A click and a slip of the knife
    Slowly edging back the screen
    Unlocking your world of dreams
    Night is when I slip into your life
    Bringing with me guns and strife
    ^^^
    You had my attention from the first stanza my friend. A bone chilling write!