Wow this is great <33 i really love it alot

Sure it LOVE

amazin poem
I loved the flow in it 5/5

I really love reading your poem... feels like we're feeling the same. continue writing poem! you inspire me a lot!

Great work, you are a really good writer.....

I loveddd the last lines. I read another one of your poems, (You don't care) and i thought it was good. i can totally relate to both. Loved them. keep writing. hope to hear from u soon! 5/5

` Liz =]

It really good but it dives me crazy i had to read it like 7 time to understand it but i finily did and it was really good "great jod" i like it about

I love chocolate doves!!! lol and this poem very nicely descripted.. u did wonderful! keep it up 5/5 always
Kate~