Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I absolutely love that first stanza. It was the perfect way to begin the poem and it easily got me hooked. The emotions were intense and sad, and the flow was great. :) Spectacular job, m'dear. Overall: 5.5

-- Stephanie. <3

I felt the emotion... it was sad.. hmm beautiful i love the fact that i felt every word as true.. hmm speechless. i loved it.. 5/5

Arghh that was really sad...good poem thoough very detailed with your emotions good job

Wow sad...i felt all the emotions.....Beautiful and sad...i don't no what else to say hun...Keep up the great work though!

Jenna Bignell

Great job this poem was packed with sad emotion and i really enjoyed reading it.
Excellent job ^^
5/5

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FABULOUS(5/5)
I am deeply touched to read your feelings in the words of this poem....Good work.
Please, read my poem "WHEN SOME ONE LEAVES FOR EVER" and rate it...You can rate it as you like,It will matter alot to me.
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Junaid

Hello
I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
Thanks alot
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