I was engrossed in this piece. It was powerful and dark. I personally found it non-erotic and I am sure that was its intent. Sex without love is dead and hollow and thus cold to a feeling heart and sensual mind.
I am glad I stummbled upon this - thank you!
I just happen to wonder across this poem and all to often casual relationships get mistaken by one party to mean something more. Since sex is one of the few acts in life that involves a persons body, mind, soul and spirit.... One can easily create meaning in a wonderful sex session where it was meant to have none. You did it very bluntly but creatively also. Kudos.