Comments : Perfect Day

  • 9 years ago

    by firexdancer

    I can't stop smiling right now. Your poems are just so sincere and sweet! I just want to go: AWWWW! This really made me happy, many people don't really write in this beautiful, honest way you do, and I just love this.

    "Tender kisses and lingering words,
    Between a couple of love-struck nerds.
    Cute little smiles and innocent glances,
    Inside jokes and private dances."

    ^I thought this part of the poem was one of the cutest, but I loved the entire thing.
    5/5
    ~gabriella

  • 9 years ago

    by David Ensor

    Wow, i really like this one too. I like your perspective on life. cant wait to read another.

  • 9 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Beautiful poem. "Tender kisses and lingering words, Between a couple of love-struck nerds." -- That parts my fave. Soo cute. Keep up the good work.