This poem was better than the one I just read, I think I could fee more emotion in this, maybe that was the problem with the last one, for me.

Once again, good words, good lines good rhymes. Lines I espically liked were 'Without you, all my skies are dark instead of blue.' and 'My soul is aching, my tattered heart beyond repair'. Both were worded rather well, I thought.

Brad

Wow..how sad..i really like it..even if i'm not a person that likes rhymey poems....but it was great.
"I live for the memory of the moments we shared.
Here in the shadows of yesterday, I call your name,
If for nothing but to remind you life isn't the same"
^^^ very nice!
***aLy***