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A touching gesture, i am moved...
by Jodie Phillips
Your choice of words are great, i think you need to arrange the layout of the poem better maybe in verses, just seperated a bit.
Very sad, and im sorry for your loss. keep up the heartfelt emotions.
by robin milford
I enjoyed this one great choice of words very touching. Sorry for your loss. the only problems I see here is the format and to many commas.
This was a very nice poem and im srry about ur dad. I lost my mom when i was 6 so i could relate to your feelings :) keep it up