Comments : Forever with us

  • 9 years ago

    by Abha

    A touching gesture, i am moved...

  • 9 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Your choice of words are great, i think you need to arrange the layout of the poem better maybe in verses, just seperated a bit.
    Very sad, and im sorry for your loss. keep up the heartfelt emotions.

  • 9 years ago

    by robin milford

    I enjoyed this one great choice of words very touching. Sorry for your loss. the only problems I see here is the format and to many commas.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mary

    This was a very nice poem and im srry about ur dad. I lost my mom when i was 6 so i could relate to your feelings :) keep it up