Guide me throughout this whole week,
For without you I am very weak.
The use of "weak" and "week" threw the flow off for me. Other than that this was an amazing piece that just filled me with love. The emotions were real and true. The flow was flawless until the last two lines. Well done *5/5*
This poem has such an amazing flow and rhythm to it, I absolutely love that.
It was small, and it somehow seemed there could be more to it, but at the same time there couldn't. More as if there's something hidden that won't be let out? Even though, I'm sure that's not the case with this. Maybe there was just a little lack of emotion or something in the middle of the poem.
I'm not quite sure, but it's an amazing poem and you surely deserve a 5/5 on it. (: