Comments : So Tired Of Rabbits

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    This is very funny. Good job on the challenge :)

    Tell the kids the bunny died
    To be repalced this year
    By a fluffy yellow duckling
    With small and dainty ears

    Poor kids....LOL...I love the small and dainty ears. You did a great job on the entire poem but I just loved these lines.
    Love Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Debbie,

    Hahahaha! Such a funny poem!
    I loved this one too, but I am kinda biased, I love all your work!

    Hugs,

    Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Well at least we know one thing: You'd rather not be the Trix bunny!

    http://www.sellinc.com/harris_trix%20rabbit_fv.jpg

  • 9 years ago

    by MEMI

    Wow

  • 9 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I love it! Short of Bill Hicks' Lincoln logs from the Sock Drawer Goldfish as an Easter alternative, you've got it spot on! I will read this to my 6-year old son and maybe he can add a comment!

  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Nice. Very, very nice. I liked it a lot. A unique twist on something well known is always enjoyable, especially when written well, as you've done. The first and third stanzas were my favorites, but I can't choose one of over the other i'm afraid, sorry. My favorite lines were 'Makes my butt look like a barge' and 'I'll have awesome skinny legs', the addition of 'butt' and 'awesome' really made the character more real, and gave them a bit of an edge. Great piece, as I said, I really liked it.

    Brad

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww i lvoe it! its cool xx

  • 9 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Writing humour is a rare gift and I must say you have it! very nicely worded verse.

    love and luck
    shobhana

  • 9 years ago

    by Morgan

    Thanks easter bunny. Quack, quack