Sorry, but I didn't like this piece much. I'm a rhyming poet fan, and that's probably why I didn't like it, plus, it was a bit messy and confused, you say you're hanging on to nothing, but then you say you're hanging on to hope. If this piece was really stong, I don't think it would matter that it doesn't rhyme, but because its not very powerful, it just doesn't do much. Sorry.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your comment on my piece 'When' and I hope you voted.

Well done i liek it x

Very good harlea.
;) lesthat