Comments : I need to tell me

  • 10 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This piece was okay. Nothing special in my mind, I'm afraid. Sorry. I liked the first stanza and the idea of the piece, but from the second stanza on, the piece just seemed...lifeless.


  • 10 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Kinda sad (obviously) but touching

  • 10 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow, nice poem! Lot of emotion from it.. as "Mist" said.. hope they tell you

  • 10 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    Good poem! Alot of emotion...

  • 10 years ago

    by claire