Comments : A.I.D.S

  • 9 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is a hard subject to address Great job doing so I love the message in this one and couldn't agree more with it. the only improvement I can see being made is breaking up the lines to make it easier to read.

  • 9 years ago

    by XxXKristie MarieXxX

    This poem is awsome. The messege is so beautiful. I am envious of your skills lol. Nicly done!

    XxXKristie MarieXxX

  • 9 years ago

    by Jackie

    A good poem, the message comes through loud and clear 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by sara

    This is soo true and I totally agree 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Mary

    Great Job i really personally liked this part

    All in all ignore always the monster called stress, for once in forever troubled you will be and in life you will never rest, haters will make it seem like its your direct ticket to death, and your personality always they will try to plunge to amazing depths, always rise up and ignore showing them you are the one who controls your breath, and forever you will always live for in
    you there is always the strength.

    I thought like it was so true and ya keep it up :)

  • 8 years ago

    by sadeyes

    Your words sre true in this one my besy friend was from Uganda and she died of AIDS and I love and miss help very much