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by kelly tavern
Hi, This poem I didnt quite know what to make of I think the words were off for me, but still there was something strangely good about it at the same time. The use of metaphors was good 4/5
take care hun x
The emotion is there, but a few parts need a little perk, perhaps you should revise it.