Comments : Thundering Hooves Can't Coexist

  • 9 years ago

    by kelly tavern

    Hi, This poem I didnt quite know what to make of I think the words were off for me, but still there was something strangely good about it at the same time. The use of metaphors was good 4/5

    take care hun x

  • 9 years ago

    by Syn

    The emotion is there, but a few parts need a little perk, perhaps you should revise it.