"than the smiles and teasing,
just close the door,
it's a loving war."
=I like this part very much..I can feel it..

"breathe,
on my neck,
it turns me on,
it touch your core.

it grows inside and makes us smile,
it makes us go the extra mile,
you could be my Juliet. "
=> Yes, I could ;) if you would be my Romeo..

I think this words turns on the love we have inside ;)

I love the poem. You know how to find a path to....girl's heart ;)

Another excellent work, yet again, different than normal. 'it touch the core' is a bit of a confusing line, but other than that it is beautiful and I wouldn't change anything. It's a bit complex, as all love is...good catch!

I love this..omg i love this