Awww so sad....very terrifically written though. 5/5 well done

Dear sweet Cory, you do know how to write your pain, it is good to see you back in our midst again.

Wow! Imagery was AMAzing! The poem really went into me and made me in my mind live it all through, incredible!
Very sad, so so deep! I really loved it!

Keep it up!
5/5

Omg this poem is sooo sad

i love it though

Awww sad but reli reli good
a good poem comes from the heart =]
keep writing

o btw thanks for commenting my poem =]

Excellent poem! Nothing is overpowering or sounds out of place. Its simple but very effective, I like the rhythm, its steady like a march or something. Well written. Beautiful poem.