Comments : The Passing

  • 9 years ago

    by needing a miracle

    Awww so sad....very terrifically written though. 5/5 well done

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Dear sweet Cory, you do know how to write your pain, it is good to see you back in our midst again.

  • 9 years ago

    by Miu

    Wow! Imagery was AMAzing! The poem really went into me and made me in my mind live it all through, incredible!
    Very sad, so so deep! I really loved it!

    Keep it up!
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Omg this poem is sooo sad

    i love it though

  • 9 years ago

    by Sazzie

    Awww sad but reli reli good
    a good poem comes from the heart =]
    keep writing

    o btw thanks for commenting my poem =]

  • 9 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Excellent poem! Nothing is overpowering or sounds out of place. Its simple but very effective, I like the rhythm, its steady like a march or something. Well written. Beautiful poem.