Comments : I lost a piece of You…

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    WOW! Another awesome poem!

    I especially loved the end.....

    Only you can see,
    That my heart will be free,
    When you come back to me

    Awesome!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~* Joyful *~

    hey how are ya?

    Lost in this world
    With nothing to do,
    But cry sad tears at night,
    Knowing I lost a piece of you.

    That was my favourite bit i really loved your poem. you make alot of sense to me, if not to others! i dont really have anything else to say about from great job and that if you get time could you please vote and comment on my poems to let me know how i am doin?

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    Wow! Great poem! I feel that way right now!! Wonderful job expressing the feelings! Great poem!!
    Luv,
    Amy