Comments : Cupid

  • 9 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Haha enjoyed every bit of it mike, the flow was marvelous and the rhyming was natural, thanks for the comment, and keep writing.

  • 9 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Its a great poem sorta made me laugh though,

    lol love this stanza in a weird way

    Perverse little Cherub I cannot avoid
    Blindfolded by love I become annoyed
    Your helmet is cute its war you say
    The next person I meet? What if they're gay?

  • I loved it. and i enjoyed it very very much. keep up the great work:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Frank the Great

    I love this poem. it was really funny but sweet

  • 9 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    This is great! It was very well written and original! Keep it up, you're very talented. :)
    5/5

    Love
    Tina