Comments : Missing You

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem is filled with heartfelt sincerity. I think that you expressed your emotions in truly excellent way. Whole piece sounds so personal, like it's written straight from the heart which makes it deeply touching. I like the whole atmosphere that you created with an amount of feelings weaved in each stanza. The flow is also great from the beginning to the end.
    Overall, greatly done.
    Keep up, I love your work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Awwww....that's cute, I wish the best for you.