Comments : Farewell

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Wow thats a sweet poem.
    Really brought some emotions to the surface.
    Just one typo in the first sentence.
    You said sey instead of say.
    But i really enjoyed it and look forward to more.
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Ill try not to forget ; ill try not to dwell ; as I walk away and say "farewell" .
    Great ending!!! a bit short but well done!!

  • Wow...this poem is amazing...
    I liked it alot...
    >I won't sey "goodbye" because goodbyes make me sad; but I will say "farewell" and be happy 4 what we had . <
    -my favorite part...
    And I really love the ending...
    Great job...keep it up...
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Goodbyes are always hard especially when it's for the last time. 5/5, Em