Comments : The Abyss

  • 9 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very original poem.
    I like the personification that you used along with the remarkable 'abyss' metaphor. This is another excellent dark poem from you, very refreshing and filled with fantastic descriptions. I like the narrative tone of your poems, it seem that you tell great, haunting stories within every poem of yours.

  • 9 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    I like these lines.
    is is like saying...you are calm until you realize something bad

    A hymn starts to play and my soul it does soothe.
    The face I see, I know is my own.
    The hymn tells me I'm forever alone.