Comments : The Dove On My Cross

  • 9 years ago

    by Prasad Ramesh Baadkar

    Hearttouching wordz.... sadness explained so better through wonderful thoughts.....

    ....... From 007

  • 9 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    The pain can be felt by the reader miles around. It is a scornful day when the heart breaks.

    I like how you chose to refrence a dove. Doves are always linked to love and the fact that you spoke of one being atop your grave just really made this poem speak volumes louder than it would have otherwise.

    Another ace job....

    ~~Sher

  • 9 years ago

    by miracle

    I love this, pain can be the best inseration 100/100

  • 9 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Short. Simple. Extremely Touching. Lovely.

    So dig my grave and dig it deep and on the top place a dove.
    And let it be know to all, I died for love.

    I like your last two lines.
    to me it also seems like you dug an internal grave. That cut deep from her departure.

    Oh you poor baby.....i still love ya

    SheDevil

  • 9 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This a beautiful poem. Well expressed feelings. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by BrokenAngel

    This was an awsome poem. I liked how you expressed your feelings and I really felt the pain. 5/5

  • That is so sweet OMG

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Aww. I love love poems! This one was adorable and sweet more than anything. You did a excellent job with the rhyming again. Awesome work. Very very good poem, in my opinion. Another well deserved 5/5.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ellie

    I like the poem and the writing style.. but you know i hate who its about lol. O well i got you now. Always and forever