This was absolutly a beautiful write, i loved it. You put your feelings and emotions into this i can tell. The flow was just wonderful. I can sense the sadness in it, which made it feel even more real. You did a really fantastic job with this. Keep it up. Nothin wrong with it at all so i give it a 10/10 if it were possible.
Another wonderful write, I absolutly loved writting this with you. You have a lot of talent, and I look foward to working with you again. Thank you for the time and effort of making this collab such an excellent piece of work.
This piece posses remarkable, captivating beauty in every stanza which is simply breathtaking.
The flow seem flawless through the whole piece and that adds great effect to the expressed emotions that form lovely and very vivid pictures within the reader's thoughts.
Simplicity of this poem created interesting atmosphere. The whole poem holds tones of deep, heartfelt sadness which made it even more powerful for me.
You two did a great job on this piece, it is impressive that two writers can portray such compact piece that is able to touch the reader deeply.
I can't find anything to critique here, whole poem seem truly flawless.