Comments : Far Away, Miles Apart (Collab)

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Words spirits and poetry bring us all closeer together Thank God for this wonderful site and great poets
    "There is an ache still residing
    Every time we speak."

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This piece posses remarkable, captivating beauty in every stanza which is simply breathtaking.
    The flow seem flawless through the whole piece and that adds great effect to the expressed emotions that form lovely and very vivid pictures within the reader's thoughts.
    Simplicity of this poem created interesting atmosphere. The whole poem holds tones of deep, heartfelt sadness which made it even more powerful for me.
    You two did a great job on this piece, it is impressive that two writers can portray such compact piece that is able to touch the reader deeply.
    I can't find anything to critique here, whole poem seem truly flawless.

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Another wonderful write, I absolutly loved writting this with you. You have a lot of talent, and I look foward to working with you again. Thank you for the time and effort of making this collab such an excellent piece of work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by MissMeg

    This was absolutly a beautiful write, i loved it. You put your feelings and emotions into this i can tell. The flow was just wonderful. I can sense the sadness in it, which made it feel even more real. You did a really fantastic job with this. Keep it up. Nothin wrong with it at all so i give it a 10/10 if it were possible.

    thanks for the comments u left on my poems.

  • 10 years ago

    by Teria

    You're both wonderful writers and this proved it. I'm not sure who wrote what - but you and Joe did an amazing job; beautiful words, great flow, amazing emotion...

    Keep it up!

  • 5 years ago

    by Amreen

    So beautiful.... Again a blockbuster from you... Great collab first of all and it didn't at all seem that you were two penning the heart and soul of this poem... :)

    For a friend close and dear,
    How I wish you where near.
    Far away, miles apart,
    Nothing compares for the way I truly feel.

    Great start and true that friends are the gems of our lives.. and been far away from them is just heart-aching...

    From the very start
    Our hearts connected.
    Lovers we once were,
    But friends forever more.

    thats great.... that because of understanding, lovers turned up friends and kept up the spirit of their friendship.

    There is an ache still residing
    Every time we speak.
    Left hanging on to your every word,
    Wishing we could once again be.


    Truly saddening... :(

    My love for you still lingers,
    There is no doubt entangled.
    Wishing you were once again mine
    To love and cherish forever.


    A beauuutiiifuuul ending.. :)
    Thumbs up Sherry... 5/5:)