The flow is off but i like it all the same.
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Honestly this poem doesnt flow. an its really choppy, might wanna consider relooking at it.
Aly

Hey girl! This poem was great!
D, I love the way you write things.
Especially the way you show your emotions.
Wether you rhyme or not your poems are still great and you know that!

This poem is great because you have every detail that most kids go through in school. I've felt like that many times!!!!!!!!!

A true great poem doesn't have to rhyme it just has to come from the heart and have every emotion that you have in you!!!!!