Great jo, well written and i love the repetition. 5/5 and what about the penguin?

I love these types of poems : )
they are so cute!
i feel this way towards my guy and so many girls will be able to relate

great poem 5/5 <33

Not my style, but i liked it for it's simplicity and it's catchyness - reminds me of a song, it's not a bad piece at all =)

3/5 - i say it's fair, not brilliant because i hate saying things are perfect when people have so much potential to improve.

Wow this poem is really good
you are a great poet
keep up the great work cant wait to read more

Exelent poem.. i like it .. only thing is that you should try to rhyme.. but i like it , it tells a story.. and anyway not all poems are sposed to rhyme. good job

I love ur poem.....and i completely understand the penguin part...lol....

Yeah i think every one wants this but most dont find it. owell i like it. whats with the penguin?

I know, i wish i could be that girl for this one guy... I love this one too.... Its great...