yeah me too. your poem was so intense, like you have to read it over a few times to really get the true meaning. thank you for the inspiration. hay, read mine and comment if you get the chance
~jescelle (yes,thats my name lol)~

"Beauty is as nature
cruel and kind
sweet and sour
totally without conscience
utterly without thought to it’s appearance
Ugly and Beautiful"

That was my favorite stanza. Truly amazing. It was so deep, and i know that sounds lame, but it truly was. I loved this poem. Kudos

I LOVED THIS POEM... It was so real, and expressful.. Awesome Job...

I really feel bad :-\ You read not one of my good poems, and I hate that you got the impression that I write like everyone else :-( I really don't... Will you do me a favor?... And read more of my poems... Maybe starting from the bottom and go up...?

Anyways, Off to read more of yours...

Fantastic....5/5

This poem is so amazing. you have such a way with words that is unexplainable. i love your writing.