Well i though this was good. it show how are feel about this person who has your heart. well i loved it. keep up the great work.

Aw, you must really care about this person. i like it. 5/5 :]

I like this poem a lot! Im kind of in the same situation with college and i know exactly how you feel! Take care hun and keep writing!

Ya distance brings hearts of strangers closer each moment .... changing evrything magically from unknown persons 2 best frenz.... so closer in time n circumstance....

N about this poem.... itz so cute..

keep it up

Best wishz... karan

That's so profund ! i understand u very well, the distance hurts soo much no matter how strong love is it between that persons.... I like ur poem,my fav 5/5

God help u!

I love this, im going through this currently. and i know how badly it hurts. well done.