Comments : Perdition

  • 9 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is really good. i like it alot.

    it flows nicely

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Well written

    "Relentless of the storm,
    The reflection never vanished
    Underground shedding a new form
    The picture still remains "

    ^^ wonderfully written... very emotional.. and very sad...

    keep writing..

  • 9 years ago

    by Erin

    Wow , i must say im impressed your an amazing writer!

    keep it up big boy
    miss you
    go on MSN more your never on
    xoxoxox
    Erin