Comments : My sweet sweet paradise

  • 9 years ago

    by Coffee Loves Nachos

    Nice.. 5/5.. love how you worded it.. it is really good.. nature is a good way to show alot of emotions.

  • 9 years ago

    by XAlwaysXBrokenX

    Nice... i loved this poem trav its really good.. 5/5
    love you

  • 9 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Nice Travis... I liks.. lol.. great job.. don eva stop.. mon frére.. ^-^...