Blue Heart [Lento]

by Twisted Heart   May 16, 2008


Here lies this heart a broken shell
Mere wounds that make me weep
Where forth a stone that bent the dream
Clear thumps that rob my sleep

Night winds of change come bid me well
Light true the path of pain
Fight hard the hold of love that died
Cried tears that seer through rain

True love that sees my hope to fall
Blue heart, my heart come see
Few words that tempt my soul's reqret
To bleed inside of me.

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The Lento is a short form that isn't as easy as it looks. A Lento consists of two quatrains with a fixed rhyme scheme of abcb, defe. The second
and fourth lines of each stanza must rhyme.
To take it a step further, try
rhyming the first and third lines as well as the second and fourth lines of each stanza in this
rhyming pattern: abab, cdcd.
The FIRST words of each verse should rhyme....this is the hard part! There is no fixed syllable structure to the Lento, but
keeping a good, flowing rhythm is recommended.

You may add onto the Lento writing a four-verse Lento and call it a Double Lento, or a
six-verse Lento calling it a Triple Lento.

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  • 15 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Great Lento! Beautifully crafted as always! Love the title and the rhyming and flow are both excellent.

  • 15 years ago

    by Marwa

    This is so sweet am luvin this so much!!!
    da best poem story i'd had evr read!!!!
    keep ti up hunz hope u reed myns

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job Jeannie..Welcome back :)
    WE all missed you.
    Love cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Wow...such a sad poem. Somehow the formed poetry seems to enhance the feeling underneath. Very good job on the form!

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    This poem was wonderful! I see how hard this type of poem can be to write but you did it so well. I love the idea of a blue heart. 5/5