This is very sad but really deep.

This is amazing
but dont be so sad :(
i am here for you
i love your poetry you have a great talent
and i hope you persue because you will be famous someday if you do and your mom will be proud :)

Wowiee.wow.wow.

if this one don't give you goosebumps then u need help. i love it. i mean really really love it. the others were right when they said that ur mother would be proud.

5/5.

keep it up.

much love,
mac.<3
[.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]

Very sad but good i loved it and by the way thank you for the comments ^__^

What a deeply moving poem you have written..She is clearly not well, but if only she knew your pain and what you are going through. Do know she loves you very much its just shes not in a good place. I just hope she can overcome her problems and give herself back her life and you back the mum you so deserve. outstanding poem, even though it was tragically sad.....stay strong hun.thankyou for your comment on my poem...

This poem is really deep!! i believe everything happens for a reason! everything will be al right! im honest! i slit my wrist every night the cuts are so deep that they just lay open! they've been infected many time! all of my poems are true about me! i cut! && the little 3 year old girl is me!!!
&heart;

Its realy sad it tuched me

Two words for you...

YOUR AMAZING!

Beautiful. and sad. i love it

Every line was just perfect, I could feel your deep emotions for your mum. 5/5

This poem is really sad,
Beautiful and stylistic though,
Very emotive and personal-also very regressive, like a girl who had fallen back into her childhood.
It sounds as if it is a true poem and if that's the case I feel for you.
I will read some of your other work, you have commented on some of my poems aswell but i would really appreciate it if you would give some of my others a look and give me your opinion-i would value it greatly.
Good luck and keep writing.
Aish

This poem is very sad and moving i know how you feel. it was an amazing piece keep up the amazing work xxx <33 5/5

I Almost Cried..
Its So Sad...
Its like i felt your emotion come out in the poem..

5/5

This is very sad and touching poem...
I loved it...
5/5

Love you poem truly keep up the wonderful work (^_^) 5/5

Great poem! i like this one a lot.
thank you for commenting on my two poems!
:)

Oh my goodness. This is so sad. It brought tears to my eyes. Such a beautiful yet very emotional piece. Wonderfully written, 5/5. Em

This touched me so much >_<