Love is a Carnation

Great poem i really liked this one. keep up the good work ^_^

"Love is a carnation
So lovely, strong and rare
Brings so much bright temptation
To every look or stare"

"Love is a butterfly
So beautiful and bright
They need to fall
Before they fly just right"

-- I dislike the repetition of "bright" in these two stanza's. There are soooo many other words that you could use, and I think you should use a different wordddd.

"Well whatever love is
It makes the world go around
And out of all the people I could find
I'm glad it's you I found"

-- Comma after "Well". :D

*Overall, I loved it! I like the way you described love, because it really is all of those things. It's absolutely amazing. :D

Five out of five. [5/5]

``Briana

Beautiful!! well done!! 5/5 i would sooo rate higher than that if i could lol. that was wow..

Awww its a lovely pom.
I love it 5/5

Oh darling,
this was stunning,
absolutely gorgeous.
It was too beautiful for words to describe.
You really showed what love is
and the true natural beauty of it.
It was just absolutely perfect. 100/5