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I liked the poem...I woldn;t quite say that I like the style as I'm not one for repetitiveness, however as far as the style goes...you did great.
My fav stanza is...
So don't over analyze,
simply go in and brutalize,
but whatever you do don't get hypnotized,
by the sparkling, shiny eyes.
I like the imagery and meaning of this.
by Roses and lilys
The rhyming was good and strong. But the peom could do with out the repetition, it gets old after a while. 5/5