HER

by Alexis   Jun 18, 2008


She's beautiful. She's thin.
She has the 'beauty within'
She is graceful, she is smart.
She's the one who breaks you heart.
I'm the ugly duckling,
surrounded by her gang of swans.
She has the world ahead of her,
and all I have are these songs.
She is the pretty girl,
with her heart on her sleeve.
But when I enter the room,
they all start to leave.
I have no reason, no will to survive.
No one even cares,
or notices,
if I'm dead or alive.
I will always be walking in her shadow.
I will always be nothing compared to her.
The movies all say it will be alright,
if only there were some way to be sure...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mello193

    This is sad....your beautiful! This is a very good poem but very teen angst....good job

    -hyperbolicmellodramictic

  • 15 years ago

    by likethewind

    Omg that is so beautiful. its really great. the ugly duckling theme is perfect, very creative.

    5/5

    keep writing ur really good.

    luvs
    !~LoRa~i

    ps. thanx for ur comment on my poem, it means a lot.

  • 15 years ago

    by Gness

    The ugly duckling ended up to be beautifull in the end sad but beautifully written nice rhyme scheme too