This is a beautiful poem it is on my favorite poem list loved it 1000000000/1000000000

I loved your poem, great job!

I liked the hopeful insite in the situation of falling. and the way you described everything made me picture someone actually falling and being broken then taken up by a man and healed. it was very exelent and i enjoyed it alot.
5/5

Thats awesome i love it 5/5

It was deep but it got everything out that u wanted to say.nice job

This is poem beautiful and very touching!
you are a great poet and a great person as well :)!

5/5

xx :)

Very emotion poem and very well written. keep up the gd wrk

Wow this is a great poem i can completely relate....it could stand to use a lil more emotion but overall its an amazing poem

Hmm.. i only wonder who this poem is about
but this poem hmm kinda describes how i still feel i LUV this poem so much goin on my favs very very very GOOD so much work put into it

I loved it, i could relate to it alot, well written.

Really cute!
I can relate to it

I like this poem a lot, good job keep it up =)

Man I'm soo related in this one!! I love the feeling in this!! Its great!! I love it!!! 7/5

You really have a way of writting that the reader can/has experienced the journey along the way with you and knows how u feel all the way through. really good hun, keep up the amazing work that your doing

Wow i really loved this poem. i dont even know what to say besides wow!! youre great

I love this sooo much!!!!

i agree wit everyone else!!!

it rocks!!!
:)

Hi...ur poem is awesome...work iit