Comments : The Final Act

  • 9 years ago

    by Kaila

    Well lets start off with the flow of this poem, it was alright. In the beginning it was really good but then towards the middle/end it got a little rough. The feeling behind this though is very relatable and sends a message, that most people have felt before. I really liked this stanza:
    It's almost like I'm running
    To catch what I can never receive
    Why did you have to lie
    When you spoke those words to me
    ^^
    Uhh! those were amazing
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I love this poem a lot. Because, for the main fact.. that I've felt the same for awhile now. Giving up on someone who you had feelings for isn't very easy. I've been trying for almost a year now, and I can't seem to actually do it. It's not the easiest thing to do, but I hope that you eventually are able to. :) What a great poem, I'm glad that I could actually relate. It was a relatable poem in which I think not only me and you could relate to.. but so many other readers as well. Great job 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Alexis

    I love this poem...
    I can really relate,
    and so can a lot of others.
    Its not easy to experience something like this...

    Great write..
    5/5
    ..clever rhymes :P :]
    Peace. :D

  • 9 years ago

    by adriaan

    BOO! I MADE A COMMENT!
    No really, I do like it.

  • 9 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    When i read this poem it made me cry and it made me feel your pain. i give it a 5/5. im so sorry. i hope you feel better.

  • 9 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is so amazing i loved it you are really good