Comments : I Found The Guy

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Aww. This is a very adorable poem. Isn't it amazing when you think you find the most perfect guy in the world? I wish you the best of luck with him. :] This totally explained everything that this guy possesses that you totally love about him. The repetitiveness of "I found the guy.." was really effective and helped the poem flow along pretty nicely, I think. Keep it up! This is adorable and very cute. I wish I could feel just as amazing as you do right now. :] 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by CourtneyyContageous

    I enjoyed reading this one. I can relate alot to this, because this is what I have also felt at one point. Overall it was an excellent piece.

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Aw. This is so sweet. You really expressed the feelings that the person has for the guy.

    There is only one thing I'm not too fond of:

    "I found the guy,
    That always thinks of me.

    I finally found the guy,
    That really loves me."

    ^^ I see that you were on a rhyming thing, but I was thinking maybe change "I found the guy, that always thinks of me" because "me" & "me" don't rhyme, technically. That's just my opinion, of course.

    But it is a wonderful piece.

    5/5

    -Briana

  • 9 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    This one is so sweet. the repetition works ok here, but i just thought it was too simple. but perhaps such kind of a poem, about sweet love, doesn't have to be complicated. it really made me smile:)

  • 9 years ago

    by kate

    Aww this is really cute, i was smiling the whole time when i read this, it reminded me of my boyfriend and everything =] you did a great job.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 9 years ago

    by coreys girl

    Thats kool that you found the right guy

  • 9 years ago

    by bre

    :)

  • 9 years ago

    by yadira

    I 100% areay with PrayerForPeace
    i really like how you made it so unboring and kept the rethum too :^)

  • 9 years ago

    by Blissful

    You found the person we all search for so if you believe hes true don't let go. The descriptions you had here were nice and I could really get a feel for the guy and what kinda of person he is. Well done in expressing your emotions so well *5/5*

  • 9 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. This piece was very beautiful. And very nicely written. The passion you used to write this piece is given off by each word you used. You expressed yourself clearly and beautifully. :] 5/5