The Sneetches (rictameter)

by Ashleigh Skye   Jul 1, 2008


Watching,
so intently,
simply waiting to strike,
waiting to control what is mine,
waiting to take everything I hold close,
laughing at me with their large eyes,
knowing I can't stop them,
they stay hidden,
watching.

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**line 1 - 2 syllables - same as line 9,
" 2 - 4 syllables
" 3 - 6 syllables
" 4 - 8 syllables
" 5 - 10 syllables
" 6 - 8 syllables
" 7 - 6 syllables
" 8 - 4 syllables
" 9 - 2 syllables -same as line 1**

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