Comments : Now that I'm Dead...

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is really good.. i like it alot...

    but the flow was off a little cuz in some lines you rhymed and others didnt..

    but overall i liked the whole idea and stuff.

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Omg this was realy deep and to think that this stuff is so true! I loved thi i could really imagine all this happing im sorry if it was true