Comments : Double Homicide

  • 10 years ago

    by Lil Ally Kat Xx In love xX

    In the ending part you should put weren't happy here... wasn't doesn't really make sense but your poem is a 100% true!! Its over nothing really..

  • 10 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I reallt liked this i loved it so much like i told you already!!!:D great job!!

  • 10 years ago

    by No one

    It reminded me of that song by Bob Dyland - Hurricane. The rhythm of that matches the song, other than that, brilliant piece =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    The poem is interesting,u drew a picture n my mind...And ur message is great ..I enjoyed reading it..
    Keep up the good work..

  • 10 years ago

    by Aussie

    The peom flows well. it's really deep

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    This paints a good picture in your head, it's unique and overall a good poem. good job. =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    It's been a while. You bring reality into this poem. It reminds me of the crime and problems of our society. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A descent enough poem. I liked the flow and rhymes of the third stanza, disliked the closing stanza for those reasons. Sorry, if this seems harsh, but it just seems really, really average to me.

    Brad

  • 9 years ago

    by Fredy

    The poem has a great flow and it speaks volumes of the problems society is facing, however the last stanza lost a little of the flow the others were filled with.

  • Wow great job....i liked how you wrote this out 5/5