There are footprints on the trail
of ones who've gone before
Lord give me strength to continue on
to the place where eagles soar
This poem touched me in ways I can't even express. So I will just tell you how I feel it was constructed.
Well it's perfect:-) the flow, the rhyme and emotions were there in harmony. A perfect song from a poets heart.
This so touched my heart it made me shed a tear reading it lol. Your poem is so filled with emotion and a sadness that can be felt. I liked the way it ended...
"Lord give me strength to continue on
to the place where eagles soar"
With faith and hope we can :)