Comments : The mountain

  • 9 years ago

    by June

    What a touching poem.I shall help you climb the mountain...as thats what friends are for.

  • 9 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    There are footprints on the trail
    of ones who've gone before
    Lord give me strength to continue on
    to the place where eagles soar
    ****
    This poem touched me in ways I can't even express. So I will just tell you how I feel it was constructed.
    Well it's perfect:-) the flow, the rhyme and emotions were there in harmony. A perfect song from a poets heart.

  • 9 years ago

    by Aryaan

    This poem is so well constructed. good rhyme scheme made it more enjoyable to read. a very good write!

  • 9 years ago

    by Deana

    This is really an excellent write, The imagery is outstanding. We all have our mountains I guess.Some are just harder to climb than others, well done!

  • 8 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This poem touches me so much. I like the flow and the emotions. As usual it's always a pleasure reading your poems. It makes me take time to think... Well done, kel.

  • 8 years ago

    by Kittens Poems

    I loved your poem.. wow

  • 8 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This so touched my heart it made me shed a tear reading it lol. Your poem is so filled with emotion and a sadness that can be felt. I liked the way it ended...
    "Lord give me strength to continue on
    to the place where eagles soar"
    With faith and hope we can :)

    To a true poet! Best wishes.