Comments : The mountain

  • 10 years ago

    by June

    What a touching poem.I shall help you climb the thats what friends are for.

  • 10 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    There are footprints on the trail
    of ones who've gone before
    Lord give me strength to continue on
    to the place where eagles soar
    This poem touched me in ways I can't even express. So I will just tell you how I feel it was constructed.
    Well it's perfect:-) the flow, the rhyme and emotions were there in harmony. A perfect song from a poets heart.

  • 9 years ago

    by Aryaan

    This poem is so well constructed. good rhyme scheme made it more enjoyable to read. a very good write!

  • 9 years ago

    by Deana

    This is really an excellent write, The imagery is outstanding. We all have our mountains I guess.Some are just harder to climb than others, well done!

  • 9 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This poem touches me so much. I like the flow and the emotions. As usual it's always a pleasure reading your poems. It makes me take time to think... Well done, kel.

  • 9 years ago

    by Kittens Poems

    I loved your poem.. wow

  • 8 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This so touched my heart it made me shed a tear reading it lol. Your poem is so filled with emotion and a sadness that can be felt. I liked the way it ended...
    "Lord give me strength to continue on
    to the place where eagles soar"
    With faith and hope we can :)

    To a true poet! Best wishes.